by RonPurewal Sat Oct 17, 2015 5:40 am
well, '5 times X's mass' / '5 times the mass of X' is just a mass. it has the same behavior as an explicitly numerical mass, e.g., '100 kilograms'.
so, the basic question is whether it's formally acceptable to write 'Y is/are # units'.
if you have to guess, then 'Y is/are # units' is probably wrong, unless Y is actually a measurement.
nb: DO NOT use informal/spoken/conversational language as a guide here!
in conversation, 'Y is/are # units' is quite common in places where it's not formally correct.
e.g., people commonly SAY things like these:
My brother is only 140 pounds.
She is 6 feet 2 inches.
I can't believe this shirt is a hundred dollars!
all of these are wrong in formal writing. (my brother weighs 140 pounds, the woman is 6'2" tall, and the shirt costs $100.)
on the other hand, if 'Y' is a measurement, then these kinds of constructions are perfectly fine.
e.g.,
If the weight of the package is greater than 25 kilograms, you must pay a heavy-item surcharge.
here, 'Y' = the WEIGHT of the package.
(If the package is over 25 kilograms... is incorrect.)