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* Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by gauravtyagigmat Fri Nov 22, 2013 10:07 am

Data gathered by weather satellites has been analyzed by scientists, reporting that the Earth’s northern latitudes have become about ten percent greener since 1980, due to more vigorous plant growth associated with warmer temperatures and higher levels of atmospheric carbon dioxide.
A. Data gathered by weather satellites has been analyzed by scientists, reporting that the Earth’s northern latitudes have
B. Data gathered by weather satellites has been analyzed by scientists, and they report the Earth’s northern latitudes as having
C. After analyzing data gathered by weather satellites, scientists report that the Earth’s northern latitudes have
D. After analysis of data, gathered by weather satellites, scientists report the Earth’s northern latitudes as having
E. After data gathered by weather satellites was analyzed by scientists, who report that the Earth’s northern latitudes have

A. incorrect reporting refers to scientists.It seems to me that data is analyze by those scientist who report earth northern lattitute have become greener

B.They is ambigious and as having is also incorrect

c. Correct

d as having is also incorrect

e not a complete senctence
and passive voice

Am i correct on above

I also want to know "reporting " is refering to which thing.
I read somewhere I dont remember where but i am sure i read
reporting is refering to "Data" and it not correct.

Please explain how to be 100% sure to which thing __ing is refering.Generally when Ing modifier comes after a comma foolowing a clause.Ing refers to subject of that clause

Clause +,+ ing subject

ing , noun + clause --- ing refers to noun following it

But i am not sure about

Clause , ing modifier , phrase
i am not sure about this format (mentioned in question under discussion)

Please explain
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Re: Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by RonPurewal Sun Nov 24, 2013 2:04 am

Where'd you find this problem?

If this problem is in GMAT PREP, please post a screen shot. I'm suspicious.

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Re: Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by gauravtyagigmat Sun Dec 01, 2013 8:59 am

RonPurewal Wrote:Where'd you find this problem?

If this problem is in GMAT PREP, please post a screen shot. I'm suspicious.

Thanks.

I have a Gmat prep question archive and this question is from Gmat prep question archive
I personaly didnt came accross this question in Gmatprep.
Please let me know what else can I do so that my question will be addressed
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Re: Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by RonPurewal Mon Dec 02, 2013 12:36 pm

If no screenshot is posted, the discussion will have to come to a halt.

The answer to your question, though, is that the part of the sentence from the beginning up to "1980" is by itself a complete sentence. So, the analysis of "comma + __ing" is the same as it would be if you stopped reading at "1980".
I.e., in the original, that modifier is mistakenly describing the data.
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Re: Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by gauravtyagigmat Tue Dec 03, 2013 6:21 am

RonPurewal Wrote:If no screenshot is posted, the discussion will have to come to a halt.

The answer to your question, though, is that the part of the sentence from the beginning up to "1980" is by itself a complete sentence. So, the analysis of "comma + __ing" is the same as it would be if you stopped reading at "1980".
I.e., in the original, that modifier is mistakenly describing the data.


thanks a lot for reply
sorry sir i dont have screen shot of this question

I have tweaked the sentence.
Please answer if it is fine as per norms of forum

In the following sentence
Data gathered by T.V reporter has been analyzed by news editor, reporting that the world's economy has become about ten percent more profitable since 1980,due to more vigorous business growth associated with alcohol industry

why reporting is not refering to editor.
I read "data...editor" together than take a pause because of comma and then read from "reporting".this way it seems to me that reporting is refering to editor.

If we have only following part of sentence under discussion.I feel "reporting refers to data (subject of previous clause)".Which is also wrong because data can not report itself.

I feel if we go with context reporting can refer either Data or editor

Data gathered by T.V reporter has been analyzed by news editor, reporting that the world's economy has become about ten percent more profitable since 1980
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Re: Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by RonPurewal Tue Dec 03, 2013 9:21 am

gauravtyagigmat Wrote:I read "data...editor" together than take a pause because of comma and then read from "reporting".this way it seems to me that reporting is refering to editor.


That's not how "comma + __ing" works. So, no.
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Re: Data gathered by weather satellites has been

by RonPurewal Tue Dec 03, 2013 9:22 am

And that's the last we can discuss of this problem without proof that it's authentic. If you find such proof, please post a new thread.
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