RonPurewal Wrote:Nah. Relatively few people take the time to post such pleasantries; it's always nice when they do.
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RonPurewal Wrote:Nah. Relatively few people take the time to post such pleasantries; it's always nice when they do.
RonPurewal Wrote:moreover—connecting these ideas with "and" is WRONG.
when you connect two sentences with "and", you are implying that the two ideas are separate and do not modify/describe each other.
that's the whole point of "and" between sentences... to say "These are 2 DIFFERENT observations."
here, it's quite clear that the second observation ("assisting...") is meant to describe or elaborate on the first part. so...
... it's nonsense to use "and"
... you NEED a modifier.