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Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by akhp77 Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:22 pm

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Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components, a major factor in the cost structure of an airline, have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their outlook for the upcoming quarter.

A) have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their
B) have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the
C) will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the
D) has risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their
E) will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their

OA: C

I got the answer but I have Q about modifier.

If C put into original sentence.

Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components, a major factor in the cost structure of an airline, will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the outlook for the upcoming quarter.

Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components, X, will continue to rise, Y.

X = a major factor in the cost structure of an airline
Y = the company management was pessimistic about the outlook for the upcoming quarter

I believe that X is a noun modifier; what kind of modifier Y is.
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by RonPurewal Sun Jun 27, 2010 7:43 pm

that is actually not a modifier at all; that is the main clause of the sentence.
note that the initial part of the sentence -- starting with the word "noting" -- is an initial participial modifier, not an independent clause.
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by akhp77 Sun Jun 27, 2010 10:59 pm

Thanks Ron
I got it.

Y is main clause.
X is a sub-modifier.
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by tim Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:34 pm

glad to hear it..
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by shaw.s.li Wed Jun 22, 2011 1:04 am

In the explanation, it states:

"The original sentence supplies the plural verb construction "have risen" for the singular subject "price." "

However, I thought the subject is "the price of oil and other fuel components" in the format of "A and B", thus a plural subject. How can I tell this is a singular subject?

It seems I should read this as "the price of A and B, where B is modifying price. However, I didn't catch that the first time. Perhaps I should use the words "a major factor" to denote this is a singular subject?
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by sagarjbalan Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:24 am

I had the same thought process too - price is singular.

I think that thought process is correct. But, the fact that have risen is redundant eliminates the 'have vs has' conflict. Secondly, their vs the is a collective noun (company management - singular) question.
So, I think the key goal in selecting the answer choices was to realize that have risen/has risen is redundant usage.
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by jnelson0612 Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:21 pm

sagarjbalan Wrote:I had the same thought process too - price is singular.

I think that thought process is correct. But, the fact that have risen is redundant eliminates the 'have vs has' conflict. Secondly, their vs the is a collective noun (company management - singular) question.
So, I think the key goal in selecting the answer choices was to realize that have risen/has risen is redundant usage.


Excellent thoughts!
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by hamed.dadgour Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:52 pm

Shouldn't we use "would" instead of "will"? The main action is obviously something that happened in the past. Why would we use "Will" then?
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by jnelson0612 Sun Mar 18, 2012 11:28 pm

hamed.dadgour Wrote:Shouldn't we use "would" instead of "will"? The main action is obviously something that happened in the past. Why would we use "Will" then?


Actually, much of the action described here is future oriented. This is complicated because some of this describes the past and some describes the future. The management in the past talked about what is going to happen in the future:

Noting that the price *will* continue to rise, the management was pessimistic about the *outlook* for the *upcoming* quarter.

Notice that "outlook" and "upcoming" indicate that we are talking about the profitability for the upcoming quarter. Since we are talking about what is actually going to happen in the future (oil price rising), the simple future tense "will" accurately describes this situation.

For example:
"Although I will enjoy college, I cried when I thought about leaving home." This has a blend of past and future tense similar to what we have here.

I hope that this helps! :-)
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by shishir_jolly Fri Jun 14, 2013 3:54 am

Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components, a major factor in the cost structure of an airline, have risen
and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their outlook for the upcoming quarter.
- have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their
- have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the
- will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the
- has risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their
- will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their


I think in choice D 'has' is correctly used, because i have read that 'of' always confuses the subject...we should consider the subject before 'of'....is subject verb aggrement ok??
is 'their' ok in choice D???
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by tim Sat Jun 15, 2013 6:23 pm

"has" is correctly used in D. Please note though that whenever you find yourself about to start a reason for ANYTHING with "I read...", you need to be able to cite the source and know that it is credible. If you cannot do this, everything that comes after "I read..." is suspect and should NOT be relied on.

As for the "their", were you able to identify an antecedent?
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by shishir_jolly Sun Jun 16, 2013 4:29 am

"has" is correctly used in D. Please note though that whenever you find yourself about to start a reason for ANYTHING with "I read...", you need to be able to cite the source and know that it is credible. If you cannot do this, everything that comes after "I read..." is suspect and should NOT be relied on.

As for the "their", were you able to identify an antecedent?

thanks tim :)

Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components, a major factor in the cost structure of an airline, have risen
and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their outlook for the upcoming quarter.
- have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their
- have risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the
- will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about the
- has risen and will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their
- will continue to rise, the company management was pessimistic about their


before i thought their could refer to "company management" in option D but after re reading i guess it cannot because company management is singular....am i right??? or it is wrong because of some other reason???
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Re: Noting that the price of oil and other fuel components

by tim Tue Jun 25, 2013 9:58 pm

You're right. A plural pronoun cannot refer to a singular antecedent.
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