Superintendent Jackson

[BradleyA93]

Superintendent Jackson’s administration is beginning to reform the school system, hiring new administrators, an increase in security, and overhauling the curriculum.

This sentence is from the SC flashcards. Explanation says that there is only one error, but I think there should be 2:
-There should be a conjunction between the independent clause and the clause containing all that Jackson is doing.
-There is a parallelism error in the dependent clause

Please help with where I am wrong

[BradleyA93]

Anybody? Any thoughts?

[RonPurewal]

wrong folder for this thread.

questions about MGMAT materials other than practice-test problems belong in the "MGMAT non-CAT verbal" folder.
please re-post your query in the appropriate place. thanks.

[RonPurewal]

Anybody? Any thoughts?

... and, don't do this ^^

we answer threads in each folder from oldest to newest. if you "bump" your threads, you're moving them to the back of the queue again.