RonPurewal Wrote:Then you've got a problem with consistency. (The issue is similar to parallelism, although it's not an issue of grammatical parallelism.)
The structure of the sentence is "In addition to X, Y". This structure implies that X and Y are two observations of the same kind.
Here, "Y" says that the brewed leaves do xxxxx. So, for "in addition to" to make sense, "X" should be another statement about the brewed leaves. Not about something else (= the tea itself).
By Ron :
Here, "Y" says that the brewed leaves do xxxxx. So, for "in addition to" to make sense, "X" should be another statement about the brewed leaves. Not about something else (= the tea itself)
We do not. It's meaning, not just parallelism, that makes it wrong.JbhB682 Wrote:But we do say the following do we not ?
in addition to Sam singing, John can dance too.
Here X and Y (in the idiom In addition to X,Y ) have different subjects completely.
I do think that trying to force "possibilities" as the compared noun is problematic here. Think of the meaning: The medicine can do two things, and may even do a third. Write the sentence with that in mind: all three (A, B, and C) are "possibilities," but two are just more immediate (or known) than the third. In my rewrite, "possibilities" is in the root phrase/core sentence because it applies to all three effects of the medicine. And notice the parallelism highlighted in orange and blue. The contrast is really the blue text: the difference between what WILL happen and what MAY happen.JbhB682 Wrote:Do you think possibilities and may play a role make sense in the context of the idiom In addition To from a meaing perspective ?
I understand possibilities and may play a role dont have to be parallel but do they make sense as a list of two items.
I have read posts suggesting may play a role does not make sense with possibilities in the context of In addition To