m1a2i3l Wrote:I love Manhattan in New York where I worked in 2012.
I don't know what 'where' modifies in the second sentence.
Manhattan or New York?
Here, you're getting into issues that the GMAT doesn't test"”namely, the presence/absence of commas in modifiers.
If you
don't have a comma before "where", then you're
qualifying the previous noun.
E.g.,
My wife would often visit me at the commissary, where I worked six days a week.--> Here, "where I worked..." does
not qualify/narrow down "commissary". I.e., either (a) there's only one commissary, or else (b) the sentence occurs in a context in which the particular commissary has already been specified.
My wife would often visit me at the commissary where I worked six days a week.--> There's more than one commissary. I'm specifically referring to the one where I worked.
So, neither of your sentences really makes any sense, because there's only one Shanghai, only one Manhattan in New York, and only one New York. Both sentences are nonsense unless a comma precedes
where.
If you put a comma into the Shanghai sentence, its meaning is clear.
If you put a comma into the second sentence, the only
reasonable interpretation is that you worked in "Manhattan in New York".
If you actually want to express the idea that you love Manhattan but you worked
elsewhere in the state, then obviously you would have to be explicit about that.