by jm.kahn Thu Feb 20, 2014 1:04 pm
Ok, so I've done this passage before, but I was trying to pick PT-62 Passage-3B apart piece-by-piece to review its structure. And it's construction looks a bit confusing. It's the comparative passage B about dental caries.
At the end of the first para, it says "Evidence indicates that...dependent on agriculture." This seems to suggest that the passage would elaborate on this statement or reference it later.
The second para describes background information/research about how agriculture results in declining human/dental health with a little twist (about fiber or grit and its double-edged effect on caries).
However in the 3rd para, which sets up the introduction to the paradoxical observation about caries, the author refers to "from the beginning of the period represented by the recovered remains" in line 52-54. This would mean that the "evidence" in line 36-38 refers to not something related to Ban Chiang because all of Ban Chiang evidence described in para-4 is related to agriculture period and doesn't conform to the "evidence" of line 36-38.
So, the line 35-38 seem to contain an orphaned or underdeveloped idea, which is odd particularly as it's mentioned in relation with Ban Chiang discovery. It's as if the author is mentioning some "other" evidence out there in line 35-38 but since it's simply inserted there when talking about the site's skeletal remains without the reference to "other", it confuses.
Any explanation or support for the passage structure? Thanks.